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The dense Smoky Mountains ahead and behind us.

Lush and green and full of life

Full of summer rain and pine-scented early morning air

I watch them rise and fall with the curves of the road

Pink sunrise glows on your face, three hours of sleep showing itself

Yet, your perfectly blue eyes are still bright and smiling. 

You reach for my hand and lace our fingers together.

Hold on tight. 

Seven hours to go. 

We leave behind the place we met five years ago, 

Our timing never right until this summer

Until you kissed me at midnight in the moonlit hallway, holding my face in your hands. 

Until now.

I think back to when you asked me on this trip

How you said a ten-hour drive to Birmingham on the backend wasn’t a big deal

Even though we both know it is. 

I smile at the thought, the warmth of the memory spreading through my body 

Six hours now

The vast Smokies wave their final goodbye in the rearview mirror

Peaks and valleys now permanently flat

North Carolina to the Virginia coastline 

State lines mark a halfway point.

The light lifts more, brilliant and yellow

Rising high above the black asphalt 

Your favorite podcast is our music, 48-minute episodes 

Helping time move faster, but I’m never trapped in its grasp

Five hours.

Never ending road finally lulls me to sleep

The passage of time becoming an afterthought 

Afternoon sun wraps me in a blanket

I see warm, bright colors paint my eyelids as I dream

I wake to fingers running through my hair, 

You smile as my sleepy eyes struggle to open.

I look up at you, the face that I’ve loved since I was 16

And I wonder if you love me too. 

Four more hours.

Terrain completely flat now, that vastness feeling smaller. 

Enclosed in the dwindling hours. 

No longer surrounded by our comfortable mountain range

Where we played hide and seek with reality

We pull over somewhere

The middle of nowhere 

You let me drive and watch my maneuvers before you drift off, making sure I’m safe.  

I hope you’re dreaming of me. 

Three hours left.

“We should get gas before crossing the Chesapeake Bay,” you say through a yawn

The air conditioning caresses my face as I search for an exit sign

Three miles to the next one

We pull into a Shell parking lot, and you kiss me just because. 

You’re driving again and roll down the windows

Virginia greets us with heavy, humid air

Moisture rises from the bay, the smell of late July filling my nose 

You call your mom, telling her we’re crossing the bridge. 

Two hours, then one.

The final stretch, but not the end. 

This was written by our contributing writer, Nora Krall.


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